goals for next year

My goal for next year is to make my writings more accurate and vivid. I found out that I had trouble making the sentences with more details. I thought that it was because I wasn't careful enough when I'm typing the information for the essays. It always ended with some of the descriptions of the circumstances that happened that relates to that topic. I will reach this goal by practice flourishing the paragraph and seeking others for help. I thought I needed to practice by myself first because training can improve themselves if I had a passion for achieving my goal. I needed to get used to the habit of learning how to do it by myself. But if I find it hard for me to reach this goal by myself, I could seek help from others. It could be my Writing fellows, siblings, and parents. They can look over my writing and determine whether I need to start over from the beginning or revise a part of my essay.