"Choice"

For my choice project, I chose to do the revise my personal narrative essay because I felt like revision would flourish the details on the writing. In the beginning, I was confused at my work because I had no idea what I was doing to my essay and didn't know what to do with it at all. Then I kept making progress with the help from Dr.D, which eventually caused my writing to be more advanced and sophisticated. But after I submitted my essay, I realized that I could make this essay even better using the comments that I got from Dr.D. It connects to the rest of the portfolio because this revision clearly shows my improvements compared to the previous revisions that I made before I submitted the essay. I was able to be on task and the right track because I had to use the track changes and the comments tool on Microsoft Word. Now that I finished revising for the last time, I feel like I'm thoroughly done with what I can do about this essay and feel accomplished of the works that I have done to this essay.